I've finally posted the full Rewrite of Chapter One. I hope you like it. Also, please take a look at the first version [link] and please, please, PLEASE tell me which you like better or of any glaring problems you see. I hope to be able to start Chapter Two soon. Till then,
Love an best wishes,
Araphete






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"Sometimes, fear...is the appropriate response."
But only sometimes.
9-9-09
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What is our purpose? Why are we here?
These questions have been asked throughout time,
And as of yet, no one has the answer.
Why?
Because WE ARE THE ANSWER.
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"Sometimes, fear...is the appropriate response."
But only sometimes.
9-9-09
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--
What is our purpose? Why are we here?
These questions have been asked throughout time,
And as of yet, no one has the answer.
Why?
Because WE ARE THE ANSWER.
[link]
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"Sometimes, fear...is the appropriate response."
But only sometimes.
9-9-09
[link]
[link]
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"Sometimes, fear...is the appropriate response."
But only sometimes.
9-9-09
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"You can't put a limit on anything. The more you dream, the farther you get." -Michael Phelps
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What is our purpose? Why are we here?
These questions have been asked throughout time,
And as of yet, no one has the answer.
Why?
Because WE ARE THE ANSWER.
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